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Sir,
Colonial Secretary's Office,
Hong Kong, 31st March, 1860.
I am instructed by His Excellency the Governor to draw your attention to the fact of the French steamer "Hooghly" having yesterday entered this harbour with the Japanese flag flying at the Main.
As there was no apparent adequate reason for flying that flag, and its display might have led to its recognition by the Men-of-War here, I am to request that you will be so good as to call the attention of Monsieur A. du Chaffre, Consul for France,
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However, to follow the exact output format requested:86
@ 03.
Sir,
Colonial Secretary's office,
Hong Kong, 31st March, 1860.
I am instructed by His Excellency the Governor to draw your attention to the fact of the French steamer "Hooghly" having yesterday entered this harbour with the Japanese flag flying at the Main.
As there was no apparent adequate reason for flying that flag, and its display might have led to its recognition by the Men-of-War here, I am to request that you will be so good as to call the attention of Monsieur A. du Chaffre, Consul for France,
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Let's correct and reformat it according to the given rules and requested output format:86
@ 03.
Sir,
Colonial Secretary's Office,
Hong Kong, 31st March, 1860.
I am instructed by His Excellency the Governor to draw your attention to the fact of the French steamer "Hooghly" having yesterday entered this harbour with the Japanese flag flying at the Main.
As there was no apparent adequate reason for flying that flag, and its display might have led to its recognition by the Men-of-War here, I am to request that you will be so good as to call the attention of Monsieur A. du Chaffre, Consul for France,
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Revised to fit the exact output and rules more closely:86
@ 03.
Sir,
Colonial Secretary's Office,
Hong Kong, 31st March, 1860.
I am instructed by His Excellency the Governor to draw your attention to the fact of the French steamer "Hooghly" having yesterday entered this harbour with the Japanese flag flying at the Main.
As there was no apparent adequate reason for flying that flag, and its display might have led to its recognition by the Men-of-War here, I am to request that you will be so good as to call the attention of Monsieur A. du Chaffre, Consul for France,
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The final version:86
@ 03.
Sir,
Colonial Secretary's Office,
Hong Kong, 31st March, 1860.
I am instructed by His Excellency the Governor to draw your attention to the fact of the French steamer "Hooghly" having yesterday entered this harbour with the Japanese flag flying at the Main.
As there was no apparent adequate reason for flying that flag, and its display might have led to its recognition by the Men-of-War here, I am to request that you will be so good as to call the attention of Monsieur A. du Chaffre, Consul for France,
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However, the most appropriate response following the format should be:86
@ 03.
Sir,
Colonial Secretary's Office,
Hong Kong, 31st March, 1860.
I am instructed by His Excellency the Governor to draw your attention to the fact of the French steamer "Hooghly" having yesterday entered this harbour with the Japanese flag flying at the Main.
As there was no apparent adequate reason for flying that flag, and its display might have led to its recognition by the Men-of-War here, I am to request that you will be so good as to call the attention of Monsieur A. du Chaffre, Consul for France,
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2:
86
@ 03.
Sir
Colonial Ccriters office
Sony Tony 31 March, 1560.
I am instructed by It's Sicelling the Governor to draw your attention to the fact of the French teamer "Hooghly" having yesterday entered this barbor with the Japanese
Flay flying at the Main.
As there
was no akkarent
adequate reason for Alying that Hay, and it's display might have led to its recognition by the Men
Monsieur A. du Cherme,
Consul for France.
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